Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.
what exactly your hobby is;when and how you became interested in this hobby;why you enjoy your hobby;about your hopes and plans for the future.
My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .
I became interested in reading books. I like needing books.Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to be a good person . Books even can solve many problems for me . I will read more good books to improve myself.
②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述① ② ③问题。
My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .
When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before.
I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read books by myself .little by little I became interested in reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .
②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future。
内容具有开放性，但它也是"控制性"的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学b灵活使用连词so…that， so， little by little， when， so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to， became interested in， come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学a也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest …
阅读电视广告词："if we don't save water ， the last drop of water will be a tear-drop."根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest . Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment. they threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food. How dangerous it was. luckily， great changes have taken place here. tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins， and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well. They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains. All these changes make us very happy.
Water is very important to humans. we can't live without water. The water we can drink is falling. but some people don't seem to care about it. They waste a lot of water. They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes. Water pollution is getting more and more serious. So we must do something to stop the pollution. We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it. If we don't do this， the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.